David Guinness

I'll be back with a few more suggestions shortly, hopefully... but for now: I would reformat most of your dialogue in the first couple of chapters, into individual indented paragraphs. ...

As Waffles said, it's much faster. I noticed it especially with the WIKI fiction.

I must admit, I'm incredibly envious of your trip-taking. And your personal library. I only have 300.

I looked at the new host... Quite a few amenities, eh?

Congratulations, Waffles!

Well, we're really insanely nice. :D Welcome to the YWS, Anti! Hope you enjoy your stay. I look forward to reading some of your work. Please feel free to PM ...

So, did the fifth dentist finally cave? Welcome to the site, trident! I hope you enjoy your stay at the YWS. If you have any questions or want a tour ...

Great!

Brilliant, Nate! I've seen this on several other forums, and hoped I'd see it on here some day. Very handy. Does the decrease in file size come from a compression ...

A state of being! - Tom A state of action! - Tim *struggle ensues* What is a virus ?

Nice job, Snoink. Interesting approach to poetry. I have no complaint, though I agree with Chevy about the end of it. I'd like to hear this vocally performed some day.

Hmm.. Precalc doesn't sound too bad, actually. I like Algebra II (so far), and circles I don't mind. It's those darn vectors I despise... ;)

I am my closest relative, being so close to me as I am, and having a similar genetic disposition, and therefore I am me, and therefore I believe very strongly ...

Pictures relieve the frustration. :D Oh, Calc... That book frightens me.

Hi Amy! Welcome to the YWS. Hope you enjoy your stay. If you want some help, feel free to PM me. I look forward to reading some of your work!